I've been so bad a feedback recently... but I absolutely loved this!
I thought everyone's characterization was perfectly spot on... even Brams. (I always thought the boy was just really really repressed, so it stands to reason that getting sloshed would bring out chracter traits that we hadn't seen.)
Josh and Annabeth missing Leo made me sigh. Josh and Donna's slightly awkward, yet firmly set relationship was perfect. It's like they both know exactly what they were doing and where this was going, but hadn't quite gotten the hang of everything yet. And I loved the slightly discordabt note that was sounded in Sam's relationship.
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Date: 2006-10-01 09:27 pm (UTC)I thought everyone's characterization was perfectly spot on... even Brams. (I always thought the boy was just really really repressed, so it stands to reason that getting sloshed would bring out chracter traits that we hadn't seen.)
Josh and Annabeth missing Leo made me sigh. Josh and Donna's slightly awkward, yet firmly set relationship was perfect. It's like they both know exactly what they were doing and where this was going, but hadn't quite gotten the hang of everything yet. And I loved the slightly discordabt note that was sounded in Sam's relationship.
Amazing work!